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Haiku № 40880

Revelation ( 666 )

by Mr Pig

Member since 2003 · Posted 20 Feb 2003 · Edited 21 Feb 2003 · 11 comments

Beautiful Angel, Mutton dressed as lamb, Sun consumes Earth.

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11 comments

[8] Shardik 20-Feb-03/1:23 PM Reply
What if the earth consmes the sun after it has turned into a red dwarf, naturally than the earth breaks solar wind? groovy.
[n/a] Garrett S Sexton 20-Feb-03/2:12 PM Reply
Watch it I know Arthur Walding.
[10] god'swife 20-Feb-03/3:01 PM Reply
WOW. This is great. I love it. Must have a better title. "Revelation" or pick up the damn book and take a look at that last chapter, just flip the pages, a title might just pop out at you.
How would you feel about taking out 'the'in L2? It would bring the count short by one, but it would make up for it in content. What do you think?
[10] scitz 21-Feb-03/2:37 AM Reply
Profound, just out on the counts on some but otherwise thoughtful and very good ...10
[2] Nicholas Jones 21-Feb-03/3:40 AM Reply
Derivative. Recycling of cliches. Not very good. Sorry.
[10] spank me baby yeah 21-Feb-03/10:15 AM Reply
I LOVE THESE, HAYIKU THINGS HOW DO YOU DO THEM PIG MAN?
[8] Ranger 1-Mar-03/3:20 AM Reply
Nice. It's difficult to give advice on something as short as a haiku, especially when it's as good as this, so I'll limit myself to just saying "Nice".
[8] Bill Z Bub 1-Mar-03/8:19 PM Reply
Bill Z. Bub breaks into song:

"666 the Number of the Beast
666 the one for you and me"

-Iron Maiden, "The Number of the Beast"

Ah, nothing like the classics.
[4] Robert K Foster 7-Mar-03/7:36 AM Reply
5
5
4

what gives?
[0] poetandknowit 1-Apr-03/7:10 PM Reply
Sing it Bill Z Bub. Right on! Children of the Damned. Run to the Hills. AHHHHHHHHHHHHH FREAKS that write stupid religious haiku.
[3] eliastemplar 3-Aug-03/12:24 PM Reply
I can't paint a picture with it.