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freedom for all (Free verse) by ThePariahDog
hands tied to trade overseas the sands, in time, taking their toll cracking cuticles of overreachers while nations shake in anger an explosive declaration missiles making patriotism fly white elephants march to war their endemic tactics failing the front a fox-faced woman's ruse railroading objection to crude comments drilling deep in the peoples' psyche bootstraps their sole possession a road to hope paved long ago

Up the ladder: almost 12.30
Down the ladder: a voice poem

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Arithmetic Mean: 9.0
Weighted score: 5.476812
Overall Rank: 2821
Posted: September 19, 2008 8:18 PM PDT; Last modified: September 19, 2008 8:18 PM PDT
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[9] Bethy @ 165.154.46.167 | 26-Sep-08/5:18 PM | Reply
emotional, awakening, real
[9] Celticai @ 121.222.109.48 | 28-Sep-08/5:04 PM | Reply
your use of similes and metaphors are very poignant!
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