poemranker ::freedom for all by ThePariahDog

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Free verse № 156092

freedom for all

Member since 2003 · Posted 19 Sep 2008 · 2 comments

hands tied to trade overseas the sands, in time, taking their toll cracking cuticles of overreachers while nations shake in anger an explosive declaration missiles making patriotism fly white elephants march to war their endemic tactics failing the front a fox-faced woman's ruse railroading objection to crude comments drilling deep in the peoples' psyche bootstraps their sole possession a road to hope paved long ago

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[9] Bethy 26-Sep-08/5:18 PM Reply
emotional, awakening, real
[9] Celticai 28-Sep-08/5:04 PM Reply
your use of similes and metaphors are very poignant!