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freedom for all (Free verse) by ThePariahDog

hands tied to trade overseas the sands, in time, taking their toll cracking cuticles of overreachers while nations shake in anger an explosive declaration missiles making patriotism fly white elephants march to war their endemic tactics failing the front a fox-faced woman's ruse railroading objection to crude comments drilling deep in the peoples' psyche bootstraps their sole possession a road to hope paved long ago

Celticai 28-Sep-08/5:04 PM
your use of similes and metaphors are very poignant!




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