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Revelation ( 666 ) (Haiku) by Mr Pig

Beautiful Angel, Mutton dressed as lamb, Sun consumes Earth.

god'swife 20-Feb-03/3:01 PM
WOW. This is great. I love it. Must have a better title. "Revelation" or pick up the damn book and take a look at that last chapter, just flip the pages, a title might just pop out at you.
How would you feel about taking out 'the'in L2? It would bring the count short by one, but it would make up for it in content. What do you think?




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