Re: a comment on Sharks For Libido by scitz |
17-Feb-03/8:27 AM |
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Re: Death Of Day ( re-edit) by Mr Pig |
16-Feb-03/8:26 AM |
wow, wow, wow, ---this is quality man
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Re: His Dying Words (2nd draft) by Ranger |
16-Feb-03/2:59 AM |
Its actually Caducus, Ranger this is quite a mature piece, I love all the lines except the 1000 winds, four winds is ok, try and find out the name for the most desructive wind is, as this is all about destruction. The end line should be simply this...dozens of sympathy cards, but condolences ring hollow.
something like that, but in your words. I'm giving a 9 here and be encouraged this I respect more than your other stuff.
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Re: The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig |
13-Feb-03/7:53 AM |
Simplistic and beautiful.
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Re: The Blooding by Mr Pig |
12-Feb-03/2:32 AM |
oooooh you foxy fucker, this is 1st class
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Re: Mother Earth by DewDrop |
11-Feb-03/4:44 AM |
does famring coffee beans for coffee beans make sense though? thats what is bugging me on an otherwise fine piece?
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Re: Mother Earth by DewDrop |
11-Feb-03/4:44 AM |
does famring coffee beans for coffee beans make sense though? thats what is bugging me on an otherwise fine piece?
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Re: Love Under Will by Tyriana |
6-Feb-03/8:40 AM |
lots of vivid words in this, its very well written and the 1st yoga reference i've seen in a poem, i'm impressed. -9-
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Re: the price of success by brazen |
5-Feb-03/10:10 AM |
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Re: It's Over by Jigg |
31-Jan-03/5:51 AM |
Roadkill relationship liked this 8
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Re: Jesus was a necromancer by horus8 |
23-Jan-03/5:32 AM |
oH mY gOd !
I thought we were gods toilet he seems to like shitting on us but I do dig this because its so blatantly controversial and your proud of it. The end line could win the war ! 9
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Re: Jesus rides the comet by Shardik |
23-Jan-03/5:16 AM |
Cant make total sense of it but you seem to know what your going on about. I love its vibe though, quite humorous was that intentional? -8
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Re: a comment on Sex with a hairy brazilian by scitz |
22-Jan-03/9:53 AM |
Theres nothin like a mouthful of salty brazil nuts to salivate the mouth (she told me).
Everytime I wear my I LOVE BRAZIL T-Shirt it is with pride.
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Re: Poemwanker is a bad bitch by Bobjim the II |
18-Jan-03/2:09 AM |
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Re: she was a garden of roses by crin |
18-Jan-03/2:08 AM |
My pre conceptions of this (pre-read) was it would be clice ridden, i was wrong its a wicked piece of poetry, salacious, dramatic and coated verses like candle wax high number? of course =9=
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Re: dark angel is a whore by UAFANTHORPEY |
17-Jan-03/8:43 AM |
shit for brains, your a disgrace to yourself, your mother and poemranker-0
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Re: Cyanide Summer by cleverdevice |
17-Jan-03/7:07 AM |
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Re: Sex by MuDvAyNe |
17-Jan-03/7:05 AM |
Lots of it too, hard to imagine serpents getting their leg over. Their is a point to this tell me what it is because i'm high on anaesthetic?
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Re: Tree by jauser |
17-Jan-03/6:46 AM |
Loved the copyright, nice touch to otherwise a poem that has the IQ of Pamela Anderson 3
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Re: Theoretical Islamic Math by Bachus |
16-Jan-03/9:16 AM |
Nice to see an intelligent american who speaks without apology for his beliefs, Bush thought yugoslavia was a car skoda made, its only one mans opinion, and one mans opinion is what democracy is about. Its always difficult to vote on these pieces but Bachus carry on taking no prisoners theres too much bullshit in this world this is escapism like it or bike it. ###8
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