poemranker ::It's Over by Jigg

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Lyric № 38718

It's Over

by Jigg

Member since 2002 · Posted 30 Jan 2003 · 3 comments

Turn on the side light And let me see All the things that aren't quite There for me Switch off the main beam And let me know Conversations in mid-stream Ruthless words just flow Show me the night sky Pitch black, no stars Then I'll explain why This heart's all scars

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3 comments

[8] scitz 31-Jan-03/5:51 AM Reply
Roadkill relationship liked this 8
[7] Caducus 31-Jan-03/6:03 AM Reply
add a chorus for you have something here maybe -7
[8] marvelis 31-Jan-03/5:17 PM Reply
Poem was good. I also like the fact that it was lyric, which I'm noticing is pretty rare on this site. The only critizisim that I have is the title. It's very beneith the poem. But all in all, as I said, it's good.