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the secret life of eyebrows (Free verse) by Bill Z Bub
sometimes my arrogance astounds me frightens me frowns me there is no basis none at all there is no end to lost opportunity is it that look that I give like you're crazy like you're coming on like Heracles I tried to tame them but was entangled strangled neck crook angle cracked asphalt angel decked out summer phaedrus helio-fabulous manicure toppled gritting on toes and smokers grappled but I've lost all addictions save for this razor think this'll phase her?

Up the ladder: early morning write
Down the ladder: It's Over

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.428571
Weighted score: 5.384202
Overall Rank: 3159
Posted: January 29, 2003 9:12 PM PST; Last modified: August 17, 2003 5:39 PM PDT
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[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 30-Jan-03/1:20 AM | Reply
how could i not ten this?
[10] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 4-Jun-03/4:02 PM | Reply
The best.
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 17-Aug-03/6:55 PM | Reply
I see you have found Jesus too.

http://www.subgenius.com/bigfist/pics6/legume3/legume3TN/_choosejesus.html

We are pretty sunbeams aren't we?
[10] Lifeboatman @ 202.78.97.13 | 17-Aug-03/8:06 PM | Reply
10.. really good
[10] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.72 | 17-Aug-03/8:14 PM | Reply
If there's a best poet (overall) award for this site, I'd vote for you. eyebrows, HA! whodathunk.
[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.182.238 > INTRANSIT | 17-Aug-03/8:36 PM | Reply
Aww, thanks! Now I feel special. :))
[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.182.238 | 21-Aug-03/7:36 PM | Reply
What the hell? Am I on crack or something?
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