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Gloria's Falling Sun (Other) by OneFingerAnswer
The color of sunset, pouring down over her eye
She looks at him, pupils asking why
The bruises forming already, like a darkening sky
She looks away, heavy breath covering her sigh
Apologies are to come like the light of a star,
Meaning nothing of logic yet so romatic from afar
She'll think it over again in some rundown bar,
They'll all whisper when she gets back into his car
Instant replay of the night before, deja vue
She'll cower in a corner, it's all she can do,
Perfectly block the combo, she's knows the one-two;
The third will catch her jaw, that part is all new
Laid out cold, pale yet shadowed like the moon
Waking, she'll claim she's leaving, she'll sing the old tune
Reflectioned light of your words, while fighting the swoon
Parry the sword of Damocles for long and it will thrust too soon
The darkness of night denied at the coming of the sun
During the day and in the light he's so much fun
Despite his nasty Hyde, his Jekyll is a convincing one
Dawn following dusk until his starless night has finally won
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.428571
Weighted score: 5.384202
Overall Rank: 3225
Posted: February 16, 2003 4:03 AM PST; Last modified: February 16, 2003 4:03 AM PST
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