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she was a garden of roses (Free verse) by crin
i had a passion built upon
lies and images
wrapped in plastic
she had quite a hold on me
a little surprise inside
a secret behind those closed lips
she manifested like beauty everytime
but kept herself in shrouds
she was a garden of roses
and her thorns were covered
with truth serums and love potions
drawing me nearer
yet pushing me away with a hundred arms
of steel resolve and gentle tears
i was a lost cause
fallen to deception
and sleeping peacefully in blankets of mist
she was an angel
tied up in bonds of expectations and promises
swaying gently from the lights
casting swadows all over me
there's no melody today
but there is melancholy
spreading all over me
and i begged
keep your secrets behind your back
and give me a kiss
she was dead wrapped in plastic
and i deep mystique
there's no melody today
but there is melancholy
spreading all over me
like the thickest honey
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Weighted score: 6.165413
Overall Rank: 1041
Posted: January 17, 2003 10:40 PM PST; Last modified: January 17, 2003 10:40 PM PST
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