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Free verse № 156265

WHAT PEOPLE DO

by OMOMOMOM

Member since 2008 · Posted 28 Oct 2008 · 2 comments

BEAUTY IS A WORLDS DESIRE, THE DESIRE WE ALL CRAVE, BUT WHAT IS BEAUTY?, AND WHY IS IT HERE, WE ALL DO CRAZY THINGS, AND I MUST ADMIT SOME ARE CRAZIER THAN OTHERS, BUT THE WAY SOME PEOPLE CRAVE AND LONG FOR BEAUTY, WELL IS IS NOT VERY GOOD, I HAVE HEARD STORIES ABOUT BEAUTY, NOT NICE ONES AT THAT, PEOPLE DIED, PEOPLE GOT INJURED, PEOPLE GOT DISEASED, SO DO WE REALLY WANT BEAUTY?, WHY IS IT HERE?, WHY DO WE WANT IT SO?.

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[10] Garrett S Sexton 29-Oct-08/1:14 PM Reply
typo, so a 9 [is is] OH GO ON THEN 10 I OFTEN MAKEA DA MISTAKAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.............
[6] Dovina 1-Nov-08/3:17 PM Reply
The first 4 lines open a fine stage to play on. The last 2 lines wrap it up just fine. But whatever falls between needs some major tuning.