Re: Car Crashes by poemwanker |
10-Jan-03/8:46 AM |
Dogshit ! but its so bad it has a place here and your user name is very nice so i'm giving you 10 for that and 0 for the poem = 5, may the lordy bless you and bathe you till you choke on poetry, ( maximum respect though dude I dig you man
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Re: if she only knew by ChunkyHunkyMonkey |
10-Jan-03/2:17 AM |
Quite sweet, a good effort much better than celebrating yourself here is a 7
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Re: I Celebrate Myself, and sing myself by ChunkyHunkyMonkey |
10-Jan-03/2:16 AM |
If you find your way out of your own ass heres your vote.......2
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Re: genuine by brazen |
9-Jan-03/4:42 AM |
bravo,
yes bravo indeed ..8
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Re: lost by sir_heff |
9-Jan-03/4:41 AM |
Just read your other one which was brilliant this is not it shames your talent (3)
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Re: my life by sir_heff |
9-Jan-03/4:40 AM |
Remorseful, and lamenting but the last 2 lines in my opinion dont work, a stronger metaphor needed for a strong poem ...7
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Re: ??????? by Emotionz |
9-Jan-03/4:36 AM |
Quite a good read, honest and an apt ending ..7
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Re: The Case Begins.... by Emotionz |
9-Jan-03/4:35 AM |
This was a force until line 6 then -generic ......5
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Re: I Love You by cherish |
9-Jan-03/4:32 AM |
Ahhh too soppy for me -5-
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Re: Mannequin (draft) by Ranger |
8-Jan-03/9:03 AM |
Howcome you were 2nd in the top 15? its so unfair that people can fuck about with votes, heres a 10 for your injustice it deservred it
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Re: Tingling by INTRANSIT |
8-Jan-03/3:41 AM |
I marvel at your ability to bring words alive and tell it so vividly heres top marks for a fine pupil ..10
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Re: The French Shark by -=SeTTle=- |
8-Jan-03/3:39 AM |
heres a 9 for spending your whole day being fucked off whilst doing this
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Re: dollar collar by rosiebailey |
8-Jan-03/3:38 AM |
this is okay I have a feeling your not particularly bothered are you? heres a 5
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Re: a comment on Frustration by DewDrop |
7-Jan-03/9:26 AM |
HES RIGHT ITS NOT A LIMERICK.
ALSO DITTO I LIKE IT TOO
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Re: A Man's Best Friend. by DewDrop |
6-Jan-03/9:31 AM |
hail dewdrop, death to dogs that piss on lawns, and whatta way to go
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Re: She asked for it. by Plasticgirlwithgun |
6-Jan-03/9:30 AM |
A 1980s group called tears for fears wrote an album called 'The Hurting' and their was a song called 'watch me bleed' you should listen to it. This one your better ones as it shows a vulnerability in you that moved me a bit have a 7
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Re: A Man's Best Friend. by DewDrop |
6-Jan-03/7:53 AM |
This is the dogs bollocks (but please dont shoot them) 10
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Re: Am I Still Here? by Ranger |
2-Jan-03/10:32 AM |
Ahh the vote manipulation is in full swing again 7 tens and 4 zeros it makes about as much sense as Bill Clinton smoking a ciger from his mouth ! well my ranger friend of young inspired genius, you are a gifted whippersnapper and i pledge thee a 10 and you have entered the top 15 (probably for about 5 mins until someone sas gets all his sexually redundant, handsomely challenged, buttfucking friends in his circle to vote you to the abyss os poemranker.
Hey who gives a fuck dude this is good everyone knows it
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Re: Blues by Christof |
30-Dec-02/5:21 AM |
Looking at love from a different angle -cool i like it
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Re: A Short Letter by Ranger |
30-Dec-02/4:31 AM |
undemanding ditty, this rocked my cradle gently (7) farewell rangerdude
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