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dollar collar (Free verse) by rosiebailey my face is mangled
as im being strangled
by a dog collar
that cost a dollar
Up the ladder:
the play
Down the ladder:
Fingers 'Round My Heart
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.2
Posted: January 8, 2003 3:12 AM PST; Last modified: January 8, 2003 3:12 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.6 Overall Rank: 12523 Comments:
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Bobjim @ 212.219.142.161
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8-Jan-03/3:21 AM
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It's crap. 0
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Bobjim @ 212.219.142.161
> Bobjim
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8-Jan-03/3:23 AM
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It's still here. It's still crap. try again.
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Bobjim @ 212.219.142.161
> Bobjim
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8-Jan-03/3:24 AM
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It's been here 5 mins. Thats 5 too long. Bin it.
you shouldent be so hard on him this is a fine excample of some originality.
It's tory boy! Yea, in case you don't know, he is a tory, he has his own online spreadsheet game and is a lonely geek. Give it up to scotty dog, the all round loser! I'm sure he has valuable suggestions. He should know all about crap. His party sure is.
I agree, this is truely origional crap.
yeah I want to be a labour supportor that actually just coppies the conseratives because tony blair is too dumb to have any original ideas of his own. Socialists that arnt socialists and arnt really anything unless bush tells them to be something.
yeah yeah thiis poem is cool and i think that john major is the best, conservitives rule
and yeah the rosie is back with quality on top
this is okay I have a feeling your not particularly bothered are you? heres a 5
Your face is mangled? I can see that, dumbass. Tell me something I want to know.
S&M not what its cracked up to be,eh?
respect, none of these incompetent fools seem to understand you, but me and freddy do
Hell yeah, beatches, da rosie is back!!!
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