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the play

Member since 2002 · Posted 1 Jan 2003 · 6 comments

Is everyone ready to go? The lights are up and bright The house is full tonight Your lines i hope you know Is everyone in their places? Will the audience scorn or love? My heart flutters like the wings of a dove And in the end will there be tears orsmiles on thier faces?

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[10] deleted user 1-Jan-03/5:16 PM Reply

i like it, i can feel the actor's anticipation and excitement.

[9] deleted user 1-Jan-03/5:17 PM Reply

Bravo =)

[0] horus8 1-Jan-03/6:25 PM Reply

"orsmiles on thier" before you attempt to get crafty nb you should, perhaps. spell check.

[3] wOrnella Mutiw 1-Jan-03/8:49 PM Reply

Will the play be enjoyed by the aristocratic, older than God, white couple seated on row 1...probably not, but that's the point.

[6] Shardik 24-Jan-03/6:17 PM Reply

Your turn...IN THE NAME OF GOD..I REBUKE YOU, CAST YOU PUT EVIL DEMON!
by the way..what play was it?

ummmm this poem made me feel very alive and wholesome.

[4] nentwined 26-Jan-03/7:21 AM Reply

could use some serious work on delivery, I think. it's cute, but it doesn't flow, and that loses it for me. 4