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the play (Free verse) by famenglory

Is everyone ready to go? The lights are up and bright The house is full tonight Your lines i hope you know Is everyone in their places? Will the audience scorn or love? My heart flutters like the wings of a dove And in the end will there be tears orsmiles on thier faces?

nentwined 26-Jan-03/7:21 AM
could use some serious work on delivery, I think. it's cute, but it doesn't flow, and that loses it for me. 4




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