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Frustration (Limerick) by DewDrop
Every time I try to write My brain spews out another sight Of nauseating fayre: Love I've found and lovers lost Life and death, what war has cost The futility of prayer Disturbed by chains that bind my mind What inspiration can I find To dance upon a page I've reached a point Cannot anoint Salvation from this rage!

Up the ladder: Dress Right
Down the ladder: My seed of life

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.133333
Weighted score: 5.1174397
Overall Rank: 5968
Posted: January 7, 2003 8:47 AM PST; Last modified: January 7, 2003 8:47 AM PST
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[9] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 7-Jan-03/8:54 AM | Reply
Intelligently written, I must say the last stanza is the icing on a cake of frustration
[9] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.64.11 | 7-Jan-03/8:56 AM | Reply
I like this a lot, but I think you may have misclassified it as a limerick.
[n/a] scitz @ 62.105.88.10 > Robert K Foster | 7-Jan-03/9:26 AM | Reply
HES RIGHT ITS NOT A LIMERICK.

ALSO DITTO I LIKE IT TOO
[9] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.46 | 7-Jan-03/9:41 AM | Reply
dona matter what eet ees. eees goot.
[7] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 7-Jan-03/10:42 AM | Reply
then scab.
[8] ramtheman1 @ 66.65.187.91 | 18-Oct-03/2:36 AM | Reply
i like this poem.
[1] Edna Sweetlove @ 81.179.83.12 | 20-May-06/5:06 PM | Reply
This is a limerick? I must be chinese.
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