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precipitation (Free verse) by ThePariahDog
a placid scene under eyeliner horizon dew drops tearing across canopied skies roiling thunder shaking the earth and heavens a flood falls, staining porcelain facade the stream snaking its way through flat-topped mountains and forests untouched by man the river returning to its origin a sordid spring once wet with creation now run dry by rage

Up the ladder: Men & Forget me not's
Down the ladder: Childhood Memories

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.5
Weighted score: 5.1185646
Overall Rank: 5957
Posted: July 3, 2009 7:16 PM PDT; Last modified: July 3, 2009 7:16 PM PDT
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