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precipitation (Free verse) by ThePariahDog
a placid scene
under eyeliner horizon
dew drops tearing across canopied skies
roiling thunder
shaking the earth and heavens
a flood falls, staining porcelain facade
the stream snaking its way
through flat-topped mountains
and forests untouched by man
the river returning to its origin
a sordid spring once wet with creation
now run dry by rage
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.5
Weighted score: 5.1185646
Overall Rank: 5957
Posted: July 3, 2009 7:16 PM PDT; Last modified: July 3, 2009 7:16 PM PDT
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