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My seed of life

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Jul 2002 · Edited 13 Jul 2002 · 1 comment

As her sweet blonde hair blows in the wind, her magnetic blue eyes sparkle with life. Although she is in my heart, when she leaves it cuts me like a knife. The time we share is ours alone, when she speaks, it's such a harmonic tone. While sleeping, her body is at a stand-still. When she awakes, who will chase her?...I will. I'am a role model for her. She will be well mannered, for this,I'am sure. I have made some bad decisions in my life, this one not-so bad. Not everyone has that little someone to call them "Dad." I will do anything to fulfill my goal, for my daughter is my everything, my heart and my soul.

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[8] Redfin 13-Jul-02/11:10 PM Reply
You captured love. What else is there to say.