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My seed of life (Free verse) by bdub420
As her sweet blonde hair blows in the wind, her magnetic blue eyes sparkle with life. Although she is in my heart, when she leaves it cuts me like a knife. The time we share is ours alone, when she speaks, it's such a harmonic tone. While sleeping, her body is at a stand-still. When she awakes, who will chase her?...I will. I'am a role model for her. She will be well mannered, for this,I'am sure. I have made some bad decisions in my life, this one not-so bad. Not everyone has that little someone to call them "Dad." I will do anything to fulfill my goal, for my daughter is my everything, my heart and my soul.

Up the ladder: Frustration
Down the ladder: 50 miles an hour

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.428571
Weighted score: 5.1152606
Overall Rank: 5973
Posted: July 13, 2002 12:27 AM PDT; Last modified: July 13, 2002 12:31 AM PDT
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[8] Redfin @ 66.168.139.251 | 13-Jul-02/11:10 PM | Reply
You captured love. What else is there to say.
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