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She asked for it. (Free verse) by Plasticgirlwithgun
The way I treat you makes me cry The way you look at me makes me puke The way I act makes me want to die I hate it when I get this way I'll do anything to feel human again I hate being a numb piece of shit Taking up the space that happy people should take up This all makes me want to cry But there are no tears left No tears at all I do not hate you I hate the fucking world Kill me slowly Make me bleed.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7654
Posted: January 6, 2003 8:50 AM PST; Last modified: January 6, 2003 8:50 AM PST
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[7] scitz @ 62.105.88.10 | 6-Jan-03/9:30 AM | Reply
A 1980s group called tears for fears wrote an album called 'The Hurting' and their was a song called 'watch me bleed' you should listen to it. This one your better ones as it shows a vulnerability in you that moved me a bit have a 7
[n/a] Plasticgirlwithgun @ 152.163.189.171 > scitz | 10-Jan-03/12:32 AM | Reply
Hm,why thank you.I shall download the song...
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