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genuine (Free verse) by brazen
half a glass is empty
when your throat is dry
can't ever quench the burning
of a thoughtful, cynical mind.
better hide in shadows
see and not be seen
rather gather then bother
with a world leaving you in fear
those lies dripping like tears
you made them both flow
can't see either as true
now to just ponder why
and how this came alive
when all i had to do is die inside.
a sphere of consequences
embodies the flow of desire
behind my blank stare
is a child with a smile
shackled to the dungeon wall
too weak to break the chain
fate has set its course.
all of you is half of me
this is how we're meant to be
nothing ever sprouted
though i never doubted
i am you, you are me.
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Weighted score: 5.1430435
Overall Rank: 5353
Posted: January 9, 2003 12:37 AM PST; Last modified: January 9, 2003 12:37 AM PST
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