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lost (Free verse) by sir_heff
I'm drownding in fears, and losing my steer. Just wanna lose myself in a feild of beer. when i come to I'll be thinking of you and the things you do, wile i start to speuw i feel like a prick My head is real thick according to you i think with my dick.

Up the ladder: the surrender
Down the ladder: A Question Of Perception

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.865529
Overall Rank: 10348
Posted: January 8, 2003 9:17 AM PST; Last modified: January 8, 2003 9:17 AM PST
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[3] scitz @ 62.105.88.10 | 9-Jan-03/4:41 AM | Reply
Just read your other one which was brilliant this is not it shames your talent (3)
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