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the surrender (Free verse) by brazen
baskets full of foreign fruits
so sweet they rot your mouth
spilling teeth in floods of lies
rotting, seething Holy ground
you once walked upon its strength
now be subdued by trenches of mud
sink below and let it fill your lungs
feel the backlash of your evil tongue.
you spent your time pulling zeros
and ended by adding up to nothing
now your but a mark in a black book
at least thats made you good for something.
harmonized in chastity
out of key with lost virginity.
recalling the eyes that brought my surrender.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.865529
Overall Rank: 10347
Posted: December 24, 2002 9:56 PM PST; Last modified: December 24, 2002 9:56 PM PST
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