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A Question Of Perception (Free verse) by Jigg You know that feeling that you're not there?
Really you are but reality's elsewhere
Sonics and visuals won't matchup
Is this your hand? Is that a cup?
You then question if it'll come to an end
Will reality kick in or will you spend
The rest of your life living this way
If you don't question more, who knows...you may!
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Posted: March 5, 2003 2:53 PM PST; Last modified: March 5, 2003 2:53 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.865529 Overall Rank: 10349 Comments:
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DurtKL @ 68.23.223.173
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5-Mar-03/5:43 PM
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...ur good at the ryhme...and it flows...it'll be a good song
i could see this as a song
Yes, a song? Except it's about a chorus, bridge, and two verses shy. This is a fine freeverse and properly titled so.
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