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Tingling (Free verse) by INTRANSIT
The landscape is dusty this morning.
I scan the horizon, grey is fading to
melon and periwinkle and colors yet
to be named. Looking into my mirrors
the same is behind me. I seem to be
lifting through a hole in the sunrise.
The sun shortly reveals the degree
to which it was hiding and shadows
the rouge and honey waves that lie
before me. I pass some large bird of
prey. Its feathers fanned out, marking
its grave and signaling that its
spirit survived the collision. The noble
sun chases me and my joints ache so
I succumb to the chase while not
losing the challenge. Easing the
truck into a restful place, I climb
down from my perch. My cheeks absorb
the cold air as I walk to relieve
the tension. On my way, hearing some-
thing I've never heard before, I pause,
and listen, and turn just in time to
see a bronze tree frond fall gently
to earth amongst its brothers and
sisters. Perhaps the leaves
were tingling as well.
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Posted: January 7, 2003 3:18 PM PST; Last modified: November 16, 2007 8:19 AM PST
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