I Love You

Member since 2003 · Posted 8 Jan 2003 · 4 comments

I lie awake late at night Thoughts of you racing through my head and my earlier thoughts of wanting to be dead I love you so much Honestly you know it's true I wonder how long I could live without you. You are my light when I am in the dark You saved me from lonliness and sadness Because you were there for me and made all of my dreams come true This is how I know I do love you --Still awake thinking of you and the world that surrounds me I wonder is my life worth living My life is so painful it isn't even worth giving So I keep myself here in this hell in hopes of being with you soon Right now there is no one to talk to only the goddess of the moon Now I wish for her understanding Knowing only that you do You understand me and you love me too --Now as I close my eyes to rest Glad I have lived another day Tomorrow I will see you if god says I may

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[5] Bachus 8-Jan-03/7:19 PM Reply

Flunk.

[3] Freethinker1602 8-Jan-03/10:38 PM Reply

To know love this great is to know pain. They go hand in hand. You must overcome the demon of death and prepare to live your life. It isn't fair to others to think of death. I know because I perseverate on death. I want to escape feeling through death. Don't let it take over you. I beat it. I will be there to help. Do not think about death

[5] scitz 9-Jan-03/4:32 AM Reply

Ahhh too soppy for me -5-

[n/a] BrandonW 11-Jan-03/8:13 PM Reply

Decent work Georgia girl, some of your work reminds me on mine. Feel free to rank some of my poems.