First move

Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Dec 2002 · 5 comments

So near, yet so far Pride keeps us wide apart Waiting for the other To make the first move. When you laugh happily I want to laugh with you When you mope silently I want to cheer up you But pride holds me back Making me wait for you To make the first move Side by side we walk On almost parallel tracks So near, yet so far Hurting inside all along Longing to talk but pride Makes us wait for the other To make the first move Against the cry of our heart Our pride keeps us apart So near, yet so far Though easy, it's so hard Someone between me and you Got to make the first move

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[4] horus8 22-Dec-02/10:02 AM Reply

"I want to cheer up you", don't fucking bother, my hatred keeps me sharp, and built for war, as for you? i pray they find you with their brick bats soon.

[6] adrenalize 22-Dec-02/11:31 AM Reply

I like the part bout moving together like parallel tracks...really nice idea

[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> › adrenalize 22-Dec-02/12:37 PM Reply

boy! you're sharp. there are only two ways parallel tracks can move together, or appart...but wai..what's this? it's 'towards'.

[7] wOrnella Mutiw 22-Dec-02/3:36 PM Reply

for some odd reason I like the cheezy poem...but then again I love Celtic cheese...ahhhh....if you scratch my back I'll give you an oz.

[8] tre 2-Apr-04/8:59 AM Reply

know what you mean