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Forgotten

by T'ien

Member since 2002 · Posted 23 Nov 2002 · Edited 8 Jan 2003 · 7 comments

to be a fond memory like being a lost dream its transcendance for a moment but now seems unclean to be lost in your midst like being swallowed in envy its powers to behold but now seems to be a kindred frenzy thats wot i am a memory lost to your voice i slip away kindly if ever heard again to be followed blindly im gone from your world a spirit torn asunder no longer an angel to you, a memory, a blunder

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7 comments

[3] horus8 23-Nov-02/7:52 PM Reply
why not bark and or park.
[n/a] T'ien › horus8 23-Nov-02/7:54 PM Reply
hhmm ok no idea wot you mean by that but if its an attempt to sound funny well done im sure your buddys will think you very clever :)
[7] ciantu 23-Nov-02/10:14 PM Reply
Short but sweet, I never cared for those long poems. Very good. I like your work so far.
[10] Ranger 25-Nov-02/2:15 AM Reply
Wowee, I didn't know you were that depressed. That's a very good poem though.
[9] Yardbird 25-Nov-02/5:21 AM Reply
Damn straight! 9 :)
[10] MuDvAyNe 8-Jan-03/6:40 AM Reply
Mikey, hand me that head and put all your hands arms and flippers in the air
[7] Caducus 8-Jan-03/8:10 AM Reply
Enjoyed this -7-