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Forgotten (Lyric) by T'ien to be a fond memory like being a lost dream
its transcendance for a moment but now seems unclean
to be lost in your midst like being swallowed in envy
its powers to behold but now seems to be a kindred frenzy
thats wot i am a memory
lost to your voice i slip away kindly
if ever heard again to be followed blindly
im gone from your world a spirit torn asunder
no longer an angel to you, a memory, a blunder
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Posted: November 23, 2002 4:46 PM PST; Last modified: January 8, 2003 6:37 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.899147 Overall Rank: 9887 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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23-Nov-02/7:52 PM
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why not bark and or park.
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T'ien @ 217.45.8.75
> horus8
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23-Nov-02/7:54 PM
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hhmm ok no idea wot you mean by that but if its an attempt to sound funny well done im sure your buddys will think you very clever :)
Short but sweet, I never cared for those long poems. Very good. I like your work so far.
Wowee, I didn't know you were that depressed. That's a very good poem though.
Damn straight! 9 :)
Mikey, hand me that head and put all your hands arms and flippers in the air
Enjoyed this -7-
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