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Forgotten (Lyric) by T'ien

to be a fond memory like being a lost dream its transcendance for a moment but now seems unclean to be lost in your midst like being swallowed in envy its powers to behold but now seems to be a kindred frenzy thats wot i am a memory lost to your voice i slip away kindly if ever heard again to be followed blindly im gone from your world a spirit torn asunder no longer an angel to you, a memory, a blunder

ciantu 23-Nov-02/10:14 PM
Short but sweet, I never cared for those long poems. Very good. I like your work so far.




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