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Jesus was a necromancer (Haiku) by horus8 God is a toilet.
I have yet to fuck mother.
She is Muslim red.
Up the ladder:
We visited the gay men on the veranda
Down the ladder:
Could You Know?
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.4210525
Posted: July 23, 2002 7:02 PM PDT; Last modified: January 22, 2003 2:44 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.4485097 Overall Rank: 12900 Comments:
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razorgrin @ 142.166.108.5
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24-Jul-02/1:08 PM
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best title ever
You're into theatre? Have you checked out any of Sondheim's musical productions?
Oh, the poem... um... 6.
I don't care what you say. I can get four people to testify he was building my hotrod at the time.
anger
great title.
The first thing I did when I read this poem was laugh my ass off. Its so fuckin awesome.
Lots of comments no votes. I'll give it a 3. not your best
sorry, h.
we all hate you now. ornella convinced us that you are bad. hear that tanya? you win! you can go away now; we don't like him any more. have a nine for your poem, well, because i know.
Thank you for your kind words. I will not forget you. You've been wonderful! Thank you Jeremi for entering my life and bringing me so much joy, love, beauty, kindness, and happiness. You've truly shown me the way.....
Tanya? This is a fact. There are between 100,000 and 1,000,000 various writing forums on the web. Why did you choose
this one? Especially since YOU ARE NEITHER A POET, NOR A WRITER (All capitalized for emphasis not excitement). Then ask yourself why you stay? Exactly. Stalker. Or even yet why keep your user name? any sane person would of recreated themselves to learn about poetry by now..shedding the shadow of the ornella stink that you waift in. Simple rename yourself, shutup, be civil...and learn without fucking with the people who are actually here to write about things other than your detestment of me, your addiction to soda, and moderately interesting trivia facts. If you are trying to do what Bachus, Blade, and da, settle, katie, and other poemranker veterans who do alot of jabbering do 'creatively'..what you forget is those writers in all actuality...use those characters in an ingenius ways to branch off into areas of writing that their other user names wont allow them to, because of sterotyping by avid readers. but, regardless, on all accounts of my lecture. You are miserably beyond hope no matter how one sums it up. Ps. if you plan on approaching acting in LA. like you did poetry. You're fucked..
aelo, i am street performer. i play with cobra. since my accident, i stay on computer all day. my cobra, he hit my eye. aahhhhgggghhhhh. i play flute. i play the wrong song... i go toooooooo tooooddlllleeeee tooooo toooooddllllleeeee tooooo... and he HIT ME. aahhhhhggghhhhh.
HE HIT MY EYE WITH THE POISON TOOTH
jerky boys, second album.
First was way better.
oH mY gOd !
I thought we were gods toilet he seems to like shitting on us but I do dig this because its so blatantly controversial and your proud of it. The end line could win the war ! 9
In every mosque, in every church i can smell the effigys of horus burning (even then we can feel the warmth, see the light) as muslims would say....ahh this is bloody lovely innit, My brother scitz hates haikus but he liked this one, horus your a naughty naughty boy. *9*
I don't care that this is sacreligious, it is crap any way you look at it. nice job.
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