| Re: Igor's inspiration by zzinnia66 |
15-Jul-03/3:57 PM |
Pure but the title reminds me of Draculas insect eating slave.
How was Afrique?
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| Re: Acoustic by zzinnia66 |
15-Jul-03/3:55 PM |
Its like the fabulous baker boys Z style ! pffeifered up to the max.
now light that cute cigar, pull up that pale denier and show some thigh.
Very suave, sultry liked the rasp.9
welcome back -you bang
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| Re: HATE by forsaken'sbigbro |
15-Jul-03/3:52 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Watching My Childhood Vanish by Caducus |
1-Jul-03/8:47 AM |
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| Re: Hollow and Alone by willknots_chick |
18-Jun-03/6:32 AM |
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i'm flabbergasted as to how this got a 10. Its one of a hundred toffees in the same foil wrapper. Its not crap but its at best a 5
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| Re: a comment on An Invitation From Poetry.com by scitz |
17-Jun-03/1:40 PM |
Good lad Horus kickass move on your part.
I am about to enter 10 poems all in the names of 'actors' from Dallas, here are the entries I hope will 'be considered for our highest prize'.
Actors...................................Poem Entered
Ken Kercheval (aka Cliff Barnes)........White Oil Spurt
Patrick Duffy (Bobby)...................Shower me with love
Barbara Bel Geddes (Bobbys Mum).........Come On Me Sweet 'Jesu'
Victoria Principal......................Cable will do
Larry Hagman............................Who the fuck shot me?
Howard Keel............................Digging for oil with my wrinkly spade.
Had to exorcise the asshole in me.
Sorry to all the Dallas fans.
(Don't tell on me will yah?)
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| Re: a comment on The Contract (2nd draft) by scitz |
17-Jun-03/1:20 PM |
Thanks for the advice I have listened and changed, adding a replacement line for those pesky Angels.
Yep ! think this is better than the one I wrote on the shitter.
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| Re: Thorns by poetandknowit |
17-Jun-03/9:36 AM |
Thought this was brilliant, I love line 2 its original. Your an interesting character I either love your stuff or hate it and you've said a couple of negative things about me in the past but fuck it we don't have to like each other.
I feel I am improving as a writer, more experimental and I believe you must selectively read the good and ignore the bad and let it inspire you.
What about you ?
By the way my brother's gone AWOL last I heard he was state side.
Great poem - seriously.
a rare 10
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| Re: a comment on An Invitation From Poetry.com by scitz |
17-Jun-03/8:08 AM |
Hey Dark, I have 2 VIP tickets and will feel really bad on my own, would you possibly be doing anything that night. I must confess to dreaming of reading in fromt of the stern faced strict judges 'Aids in a glass' you own the copyright and i was wondering if you would allow me to read it aloud in a barotone voice next to my cherry bowl trophy I have won for my 'outstanding contribution' to poets?
Apparently we're icons in the Faroe islands.
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| Re: Goddess of the vineyard by INTRANSIT |
11-Jun-03/3:43 PM |
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LAst 2 lines of S1 just fuck it up, other than that I really absorbed myself in to this so I ask you from the bottom of my tiny black heart, change it. 7
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| Re: Jackanapes and smoke buttons by Bachus |
11-Jun-03/3:42 PM |
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I love these outbursts of yours there so fucking apt.8
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| Re: Iceman by Kitch |
11-Jun-03/3:40 PM |
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Not a bad try 2nsd last line needs changing, quite evocative lose the middle
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| Re: a comment on 11th September (a senyru) by scitz |
11-Jun-03/3:32 PM |
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You are a Gentlemen, thank you very much.
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| Re: a comment on Oil Spill by scitz |
10-Jun-03/3:29 PM |
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Yes Horus I like it and its very much dark angel.
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| Re: a comment on 11th September (a senyru) by scitz |
10-Jun-03/12:14 PM |
Robert,
I hope they use kerosene or this senryu's useless. I'm pretty sure they do but if you find out please let me know as you wouldn't have thought that for no reason.
I'm glad you got the jist.
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| Re: Jeremi B. Handrinos: Part 2 by wCUNTw |
5-Jun-03/8:10 AM |
Yes I read the barrage of comments on the crap poem you and I berated. Then little dutch boys finger fell off in the dam and a deluge of insults came yours and Shardiks way. her poem (her name fails to register) was masqueraded in a lamentful excuse of 'its about my friend having SIDS (Severe Incompetent Dickhead Syndrome) I cant write a good poem so I'll come out with talons and spit shit. I get it man.
Your poems not as important as its retailiatory message and i quote from wisdom words of val kilmers voiceover for Elvis in 'True Romance' ---
I like you man, always have always will
8 turkeys shot.
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| Re: Carpet threading the sky by INTRANSIT |
5-Jun-03/8:05 AM |
09
and yes eschelons fits like a milliners hat. Well done its a daisy.
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| Re: A Moment In Nowhere by Mr Pig |
5-Jun-03/8:03 AM |
Sublime, a wonderful poem and thats all I can say and all I'm gonna say.
Your a show off, a scoundrel, and a german sausage eating Lord of a sprawling property.
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| Re: Where I Stand by Katie |
4-Jun-03/9:27 AM |
Where do you like to stand Katie?
And where do you most like to sit?
Answer these 2 questions and I will marry my pit bull in white dress.
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| Re: "Your shrimp cocktail", wide ass. by Bachus |
4-Jun-03/9:26 AM |
Ahh and line 2, yes I recall a japanese waiter in a sushi bar with 3 fingers 'making love to my fish' too, he made so much more effort than the others.
Hmm yes I feel a 'fortune cookie moment' coming on.
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