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Hollow and Alone

Member since 2003 · Posted 17 Jun 2003 · 4 comments

I feel hollow Hollow and alone All alone in my mind Watching waiting for something I sit Longing for rescue I sit alone Crying in silence I sit alone Waiting for the rescue Of someone unknown Now I stand Yet still alone Not breathing deep But still living Hollow and alone

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4 comments

[10] JoyLuck 18-Jun-03/12:32 AM Reply

have you ever seen hollow man?
worst movie ever.
Kinda like your poem is the worst ever.

[10] JoyLuck 18-Jun-03/12:40 AM Reply

i wasjust kdding
it is a very nice poem
we all feel alone at times
especially me :(
but i think my poetry helps me
get thru the hard times
so keep on truckin

[5] scitz 18-Jun-03/6:32 AM Reply

i'm flabbergasted as to how this got a 10. Its one of a hundred toffees in the same foil wrapper. Its not crap but its at best a 5

[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> 18-Jun-03/11:24 AM Reply

God, why does poetry attract idiots?
Oh well, time for another tastless plug.

I'm the cutie on the bottom, lol. Bottom, get it? No, I don't suppose you would.