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Hollow and Alone (Free verse) by willknots_chick I feel hollow
Hollow and alone
All alone in my mind
Watching waiting for something
I sit
Longing for rescue
I sit alone
Crying in silence
I sit alone
Waiting for the rescue
Of someone unknown
Now I stand
Yet still alone
Not breathing deep
But still living
Hollow and alone
Up the ladder:
Mistake or Misfortune
Down the ladder:
but i was
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.6
Posted: June 17, 2003 11:22 PM PDT; Last modified: June 17, 2003 11:22 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0715218 Overall Rank: 6549 Comments:
i wasjust kdding
it is a very nice poem we all feel alone at times especially me :( but i think my poetry helps me get thru the hard times so keep on truckin
i'm flabbergasted as to how this got a 10. Its one of a hundred toffees in the same foil wrapper. Its not crap but its at best a 5
God, why does poetry attract idiots?
Oh well, time for another tastless plug. I'm the cutie on the bottom, lol. Bottom, get it? No, I don't suppose you would. 119 view(s)
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worst movie ever.
Kinda like your poem is the worst ever.