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Hollow and Alone (Free verse) by willknots_chick

I feel hollow Hollow and alone All alone in my mind Watching waiting for something I sit Longing for rescue I sit alone Crying in silence I sit alone Waiting for the rescue Of someone unknown Now I stand Yet still alone Not breathing deep But still living Hollow and alone

scitz 18-Jun-03/6:32 AM
i'm flabbergasted as to how this got a 10. Its one of a hundred toffees in the same foil wrapper. Its not crap but its at best a 5




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