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but i was (Free verse) by nolan
i wish that this didn't have to be a cliche i wish that the air was always so calm i regret the fact my mouth was shut when my dreams could have become reality when i could have just said maybe even just a few words to let you know that it wasn't because i didn't like you but because i didn't want to be that guy the one who calls you when he is drunk and talks to you all night long with out a clue of who you are or where you came i didn't want to be the guy who did too much e and wrote you yet another 3,000 rambling words i didn't want to be that guy that talks about the human experience i didn't want to be that guy who tells you he misses the 8 hours he once spent with when you were too affraid to talk when i was too affraid to touch but when i got the courage to tell you these emotions i felt i didn't want to be that guy

Up the ladder: Hollow and Alone

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6
Weighted score: 5.0715218
Overall Rank: 6550
Posted: July 17, 2003 7:54 AM PDT; Last modified: July 18, 2003 2:09 PM PDT
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[6] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 | 18-Jul-03/4:21 PM | Reply
but you weren't?
[9] Birdpia @ 202.152.47.173 | 18-Jul-03/11:38 PM | Reply
You don't want to be, but you was. Nice one 8! :)
[9] Birdpia @ 202.152.47.172 | 19-Jul-03/8:07 AM | Reply
I Think I gotta change that, I re-read it over and I just feel.. it's really good!! Nice idea anyway. I changed from 8 to 9! ;) - I didn't want to be that guy but unfortunately I was!
[9] Birdpia @ 202.152.47.172 | 19-Jul-03/8:07 AM | Reply
I Think I gotta change my mind, I re-read it over and I just feel.. it's really good!! Nice idea anyway. I changed from 8 to 9! ;) - I didn't want to be that guy but unfortunately I was!
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