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Hollow and Alone (Free verse) by willknots_chick

I feel hollow Hollow and alone All alone in my mind Watching waiting for something I sit Longing for rescue I sit alone Crying in silence I sit alone Waiting for the rescue Of someone unknown Now I stand Yet still alone Not breathing deep But still living Hollow and alone

JoyLuck 18-Jun-03/12:40 AM
i wasjust kdding
it is a very nice poem
we all feel alone at times
especially me :(
but i think my poetry helps me
get thru the hard times
so keep on truckin




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