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Para Sa Aking Sinta (Other) by NewbieMe Sa bawat pagsikat at paglubog ng araw
Sa bawat pagmulat at pagpikit ng aking mga mata
Larawan ng iyong mukha sa aking alaala
Makasama ka ay pangarap tuwina
Sa bawat sandali na wala ka
Sa bawat minutong lumilipas
Tanging taglay ay pag-asa
Na tayo'y nasasabik sa isa't-isa
Sa bawat oras ng aking pag-iisa
Sa bawat lungkot na aking nadarama
Napapawi at tila nawawala
Basta naiisip kita aking sinta
Up the ladder:
A missing puzzle piece.
Down the ladder:
Outhouse
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.71875
Posted: March 7, 2003 3:03 AM PST; Last modified: March 7, 2003 3:03 AM PSTWeighted score: 3.7199173 Overall Rank: 13535 Comments:
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deleted user @ 62.105.88.10
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7-Mar-03/3:06 AM
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lol
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NewbieMe @ 203.131.93.208
> deleted user
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7-Mar-03/3:18 AM
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hmm so i'm guessing you understood my poem
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215
> NewbieMe
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7-Mar-03/3:31 AM
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GOD FORBID
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NewbieMe @ 203.131.93.208
> -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
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7-Mar-03/3:40 AM
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De nada Krad :)
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NewbieMe @ 203.131.93.208
> deleted user
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7-Mar-03/3:51 AM
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btw, thanks for the vote :)
mad as a hatter
"Tanging taglay ay pag-asa" likewise i'm sure.
I'm kind of like han solo. Always playing with my wookie. my name is jimmy pop bitch, but you can call me cookie.
Could you please not be so boringly ethnic? It makes my morning coffee chill more rapidly. That alone is reason enough to attack you with powerful black magick... And tuna bagels.
So how's this for boringly ethnic?
punyemas, wag mong basahin kung hindi mo gusto, leche :) Heh!
this is worse than fucking chopsticks
I think you're worst than fucking chopsticks. Have a nice day :)
lungkot, yes, and a side of winter fresh peas please.
winter fresh peas? coming right up. ;)
I wish I could understand this...
um, i can translate it but i don't think it would sound good. If I can find time to translate it, I will but I'm too busy at the moment.
Thank you for commenting - :) -
mekka lekka hi mekka heiny ho.
pluto bitch
kuncha motherfucker
do you have any idea what your names means?
it means bimbo you menopausal bitch... next time if you've got nothing to say that makes sense or when you're drunk and wasted as hell, refrain from going online you constipated looking arsehole!
How am I to place you in a nice neatly numbered category if I don't know what you are saying?
We need Tagalog for Dummies! (at every sunrise we must all use a dictionary) Oh well, points for speaking a language that I can't translate well enough to criticize you.
"How am I to place you in a nice neatly numbered category if I don't know what you are saying?"
answer: You don't or you can ask me to translate it but I don't think it would be any better if I did. I am proud of my language and so far, I have not read anything in poemranker that says 'English only'. I realise that it must be an inconvenience to some but I do believe there are other tagalog speakers here in poemranker that can appreciate it. ... but it was nice to read what you wrote. Thank you - :) -
a crap poem masqueraded in a foreign language to try and make it look better 0
you can never really tell if it's a crappy poem or not as you cannot even understand it, except maybe if you speak the language. is it that bad that i enjoy using my language to make poems or is it because it frustrates you to not know what i'm saying? it's funny though, you guys have been busting your brains over this. quite funny indeed. anyway, say what you like, say what you think, the bottom line is ... sticks and stones... and all that crap!
Have a nice day ;)
Sooo... Is it Esperanto, Swahili, or bullshit?
bullshit? oh no, I don't use your language.
I can only imagin that this says something great, and I commend your effort, however I don't speak gibberish, therefore I cannot go either way with this
gibberish, hmmm... yeah, my language is the same as any other language. I guess it'd be safe to say that your language is as gibberish as mine... and I thank you for commenting.
bril Liant.
this tries for something it cannot have. like a bawat pasikate on the grab.
oooooooooh really
*catchy
Yes. I findus Thisus Shittus. I can write in Latin!!!
I would have been offended If I didn't know that you are such a plagiarist you twat!
So I'm just saying... your words mean nothing to me and I'm guessing to others as well. Capisce? 355 view(s)
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