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A missing puzzle piece. (Free verse) by trev086 Today is the day where people shall cry
Today is the day where there???s a whole in the sky
Our eyes turning red
Now people are dead.
The towers once standing so straight and tall
Theres a missing piece, and now all has gone wrong
Searching and searching through all that rubble,
If people were smart, there would be no trouble
Now in our heart, there is an addition
But in the middle of New York, there are 2 pieces missing.
Today is the day where people shall cry
Today is the day where there???s a whole in the sky.
-Trevor Greene
Up the ladder:
Beginning or End?
Down the ladder:
Para Sa Aking Sinta
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.25
Posted: September 11, 2002 7:04 PM PDT; Last modified: September 11, 2002 7:05 PM PDTWeighted score: 3.7206476 Overall Rank: 13539 Comments:
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11-Sep-02/8:21 PM
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a whole what?
is this some kind of school assignment? Please, try not to be so predictable. I respect your writing, but capture something else...with all due respect. 5/10
this is painful, but not for the reason you want it to be.
Thanks for writing something on this issue, Trev; you've got more guts than I do. What is the addition to our heart?
Oh brother must we continue to read these poor poems. But it gets Frass' Sad Sap approval award!!
I prefer to refer to 'raw poetry', where even the most pathetically pedantic should be able to separate wheat from chaff.
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