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Beginning or End? (Other) by xdarkxangelx24
Blood slowly trickles down my hand. The source is my wide open veins. I' m Beginning to feel light-headed. Is my life going to end or begin in a new way? Why do people love life so much? What's the point of the hurting? So much pain, suffering, greif,and anguish. Whats the point? My heart begins to beat harder and slower, my breathing gets tougher to do. My body is paralyzed. Is this life or death? Is this the way you are supposed to live; in pain? Whats the point? Finally my heart stops and so does my breathing. Is this the end or just a brand new beginning?

Up the ladder: In Full Stop
Down the ladder: A missing puzzle piece.

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.4444444
Weighted score: 3.7222223
Overall Rank: 13538
Posted: November 22, 2002 8:38 AM PST; Last modified: November 22, 2002 8:38 AM PST
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[n/a] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 22-Nov-02/9:06 AM | Reply
I think its the end !
For your keyboard that is, for Xmas I will buy you an enter button
and a spring
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.213.23 | 22-Nov-02/10:17 AM | Reply
If anyone is still wondering why I ironically chose the name '-=Dark_Angel=-', please observe.

Unless this person is a second-order troll, which I doubt.
[0] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 22-Nov-02/11:43 AM | Reply
neither. it's the figure four leg lock by greg the hammer valentine.
[0] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.113 | 25-Nov-02/6:51 AM | Reply
it's the end. unless you're a pansy horizontally slitting his wrists for attention.
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