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In Full Stop (Free verse) by vulcan
He gazed into her eye A question repeated "Have I the sparkling eyes still?" A hand was seized A sparkle... She died.

Up the ladder: One Nation Under God
Down the ladder: Beginning or End?

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.4444444
Weighted score: 3.7222223
Overall Rank: 13532
Posted: September 29, 2002 9:56 AM PDT; Last modified: September 30, 2002 9:19 AM PDT
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[6] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 29-Sep-02/12:31 PM | Reply
my trick knee???
[7] Nicholas Jones @ 137.44.1.200 | 4-Oct-02/7:29 AM | Reply
Mysterious. Not bad.
[5] Dark Angle @ 172.191.4.158 | 5-Oct-02/1:05 AM | Reply
aww really strange, too vague and strange for me to comprehend, shit its late, i will just give it a 5, in case it might be good and im just tostupid to seeit
[0] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 29-Nov-02/2:09 AM | Reply
boring.0.
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