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In Full Stop (Free verse) by vulcan He gazed into her eye
A question repeated
"Have I the sparkling eyes still?"
A hand was seized
A sparkle...
She died.
Up the ladder:
One Nation Under God
Down the ladder:
Beginning or End?
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 2.4444444
Posted: September 29, 2002 9:56 AM PDT; Last modified: September 30, 2002 9:19 AM PDTWeighted score: 3.7222223 Overall Rank: 13537 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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29-Sep-02/12:31 PM
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my trick knee???
Mysterious. Not bad.
aww really strange, too vague and strange for me to comprehend, shit its late, i will just give it a 5, in case it might be good and im just tostupid to seeit
boring.0.
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