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One Nation Under God (Other) by GAC
"One nation under God," they said, Is 'gainst the rule wrote by the head Of the darned Ninth Circuit Court-- The writ they wrote, we should abort. We are a nation under God. Who do they think made the earthly sod, And all the people who live there-in; Who made them and all their kin? Who made the stars up in the sky And keeps them there? They please the eye, As do the mountains, valleys and plains. Who brings the sunshine and the rains? "With Liberty, and Justice for all," Should now become our fighting call. Liberty against the Godless ones And Justice far as the river runs. God guide our leaders, is my prayer, And change the hearts of those who swear That taking God out of the Pledge Will give the atheist the edge. God helped to make this nation great. Let us all from state to state Lift our voices strong and loud, And say, "One nation, under God."

Up the ladder: Don't Look At Me!
Down the ladder: In Full Stop

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.4545455
Weighted score: 3.7272727
Overall Rank: 13536
Posted: July 21, 2002 6:18 AM PDT; Last modified: July 21, 2002 6:18 AM PDT
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[0] deleted user @ 206.191.138.172 | 21-Jul-02/11:50 PM | Reply
Purely egotistically fanatical and overly nationalistic. Pray for their souls, dont insult their beliefs, it just repells them further.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 217.35.154.80 | 22-Jul-02/10:14 AM | Reply
"There was once a time when all people believed in God and the Church ruled. This time was called the Dark Ages." -R.Lederer.... Poppycock I say! I'm with you, man! How dare people question Jesu's pow'r? Don't they realise that it says he exists in the Bible? Don't they realise that they will go to the naughtiest place conceivable if they do not accept Him? What's your favorite book in the Bible, friend? I like Leviticus. Thank you and God bless.
[3] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 22-Jul-02/12:14 PM | Reply
Cod, is great. Cod, is good. And with tarter sauce it makes me pray and turn into Tony Robbins i dance around and hypnotize people to have more respect for one nation under Cod. Indispensible, with property and twelve step programs for all
[n/a] razorgrin @ 142.166.109.217 | 22-Jul-02/1:43 PM | Reply
When I first read this, I thought you were being sarcastic. "This is great",I thought.Imagine my disappointment as I found you were serious about this tripe. The killings, hatred and violence done in the name of this masochistic death-cult must end!Besides, everyone knows god went nuts, did a lot of mescalin and moved to australia in 1965.He doesn't care anymore.goes by the name Jorge von Scheissekopf now, I think.you make me slightly nauseous.toodles.
[5] jauser @ 63.202.235.108 | 15-Jul-04/9:25 AM | Reply
I don't know I think it's good but then the God part kills it.
[0] Edna Sweetlove @ 85.210.230.102 | 18-Oct-06/12:57 PM | Reply
This is truly, sickeningly, repellently awful. One nation under God? Are you crazy? America is a racial mish-mash, a mixture of demented bible-thumping creationist Christians, aggressive psychopathic ill-educated redneck patriots and sentimental sloppy hypocrites. And those are the better Americans!
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