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One Nation Under God (Other) by GAC

"One nation under God," they said, Is 'gainst the rule wrote by the head Of the darned Ninth Circuit Court-- The writ they wrote, we should abort. We are a nation under God. Who do they think made the earthly sod, And all the people who live there-in; Who made them and all their kin? Who made the stars up in the sky And keeps them there? They please the eye, As do the mountains, valleys and plains. Who brings the sunshine and the rains? "With Liberty, and Justice for all," Should now become our fighting call. Liberty against the Godless ones And Justice far as the river runs. God guide our leaders, is my prayer, And change the hearts of those who swear That taking God out of the Pledge Will give the atheist the edge. God helped to make this nation great. Let us all from state to state Lift our voices strong and loud, And say, "One nation, under God."

jauser 15-Jul-04/9:25 AM
I don't know I think it's good but then the God part kills it.




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