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Para Sa Aking Sinta (Other) by NewbieMe

Sa bawat pagsikat at paglubog ng araw Sa bawat pagmulat at pagpikit ng aking mga mata Larawan ng iyong mukha sa aking alaala Makasama ka ay pangarap tuwina Sa bawat sandali na wala ka Sa bawat minutong lumilipas Tanging taglay ay pag-asa Na tayo'y nasasabik sa isa't-isa Sa bawat oras ng aking pag-iisa Sa bawat lungkot na aking nadarama Napapawi at tila nawawala Basta naiisip kita aking sinta

NewbieMe 4-Jul-03/9:20 AM
you can never really tell if it's a crappy poem or not as you cannot even understand it, except maybe if you speak the language. is it that bad that i enjoy using my language to make poems or is it because it frustrates you to not know what i'm saying? it's funny though, you guys have been busting your brains over this. quite funny indeed. anyway, say what you like, say what you think, the bottom line is ... sticks and stones... and all that crap!

Have a nice day ;)




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