regarding some deleted poem...	2-Apr-03/8:47 AM
GOD I'M TOO HARD ON MYSELF ARNE'T I GW? #NO I'M JUST HARD SORRY MY BOOB!
Re: Down Lovers Lane by Mr Pig	9-Apr-03/2:07 AM
very nice bud, however not as inspirational as the blooding, but still as a concept piece, pretty damn fuckin fine.
Re: Damaged By 'Weakness' by Mr Pig	10-Apr-03/7:52 AM
Why did you delete my other comment? Anyway only you could have but in my hotel room i found this and thought hmmm I wonder why you posted such a personal poem. I like it a lot because I know you can belt out some real gold and this you have chosen to be frank and honest. Take care amigo.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-May-03/11:35 AM
Awesome, and you know it 9
Re: may 18 by Bill Z Bub	20-May-03/11:36 AM
I remember reading your poems a long time ago and though they were inspiring you REALLY are the cat in silk pajamas now. I'll keep this real: this rocks
Re: Symbol Of Love by simone_girard	20-May-03/11:39 AM
Listen man, stop reading Barb Cartland get out into the MAtrix and spread your virus elsewhere this is as bad as a blow job from 10 years of marriage. 0
Re: The Order Of Things by Mr Pig	20-May-03/11:42 AM
What can I say huh? this is what you do best and its a silky read your a true maestro at this stuff, fuck the haiku stick to freeform this is where your awesome. Aint Cathy a bitch ?
Re: A Summers Day In Stolen Eden by Mr Pig	27-May-03/3:45 PM
Obi Wan has taught you well. Join the dark side (ooooopppppaaaar) Your still my muse this is so rich in detail
Re: Hunting God by Shardik	4-Jun-03/9:19 AM
Dont shoot picasso the sound of the gun would screw his other ear up. This has a cult quality to it. Needless to say I diggit 8
Re: "Your shrimp cocktail", wide ass. by Bachus	4-Jun-03/9:24 AM
I'm not in the prawn(e) posse but i line 3 is to die 9 lives for. For making me snigger 8 (I refuse to laugh its far too wanky)
Re: "Your shrimp cocktail", wide ass. by Bachus	4-Jun-03/9:26 AM
Ahh and line 2, yes I recall a japanese waiter in a sushi bar with 3 fingers 'making love to my fish' too, he made so much more effort than the others. Hmm yes I feel a 'fortune cookie moment' coming on.
Re: Where I Stand by Katie	4-Jun-03/9:27 AM
Where do you like to stand Katie? And where do you most like to sit? Answer these 2 questions and I will marry my pit bull in white dress.
Re: A Moment In Nowhere by Mr Pig	5-Jun-03/8:03 AM
Sublime, a wonderful poem and thats all I can say and all I'm gonna say. Your a show off, a scoundrel, and a german sausage eating Lord of a sprawling property.
Re: Carpet threading the sky by INTRANSIT	5-Jun-03/8:05 AM
09 and yes eschelons fits like a milliners hat. Well done its a daisy.
Re: Jeremi B. Handrinos: Part 2 by wCUNTw	5-Jun-03/8:10 AM
Yes I read the barrage of comments on the crap poem you and I berated. Then little dutch boys finger fell off in the dam and a deluge of insults came yours and Shardiks way. her poem (her name fails to register) was masqueraded in a lamentful excuse of 'its about my friend having SIDS (Severe Incompetent Dickhead Syndrome) I cant write a good poem so I'll come out with talons and spit shit. I get it man. Your poems not as important as its retailiatory message and i quote from wisdom words of val kilmers voiceover for Elvis in 'True Romance' --- I like you man, always have always will 8 turkeys shot.
Re: Iceman by Kitch	11-Jun-03/3:40 PM
Not a bad try 2nsd last line needs changing, quite evocative lose the middle
Re: Jackanapes and smoke buttons by Bachus	11-Jun-03/3:42 PM
I love these outbursts of yours there so fucking apt.8
Re: Goddess of the vineyard by INTRANSIT	11-Jun-03/3:43 PM
LAst 2 lines of S1 just fuck it up, other than that I really absorbed myself in to this so I ask you from the bottom of my tiny black heart, change it. 7
Re: Thorns by poetandknowit	17-Jun-03/9:36 AM
Thought this was brilliant, I love line 2 its original. Your an interesting character I either love your stuff or hate it and you've said a couple of negative things about me in the past but fuck it we don't have to like each other. I feel I am improving as a writer, more experimental and I believe you must selectively read the good and ignore the bad and let it inspire you. What about you ? By the way my brother's gone AWOL last I heard he was state side. Great poem - seriously. a rare 10
Re: Hollow and Alone by willknots_chick	18-Jun-03/6:32 AM
i'm flabbergasted as to how this got a 10. Its one of a hundred toffees in the same foil wrapper. Its not crap but its at best a 5