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12-Feb-03/6:41 AM |
you would never know this if i dont say it so i will.
In our writing group you are envied and revered with admiration and respect so keep buying pens and write you are consistent and truly gifted, my brother caducus thinks you are the best on this site, i think your the 2nd after gods wife. ----10
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| Re: The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig |
13-Feb-03/7:53 AM |
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Simplistic and beautiful.
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| Re: His Dying Words (2nd draft) by Ranger |
16-Feb-03/2:59 AM |
Its actually Caducus, Ranger this is quite a mature piece, I love all the lines except the 1000 winds, four winds is ok, try and find out the name for the most desructive wind is, as this is all about destruction. The end line should be simply this...dozens of sympathy cards, but condolences ring hollow.
something like that, but in your words. I'm giving a 9 here and be encouraged this I respect more than your other stuff.
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| Re: Death Of Day ( re-edit) by Mr Pig |
16-Feb-03/8:26 AM |
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wow, wow, wow, ---this is quality man
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18-Feb-03/11:35 AM |
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not one of your best but a winsome read all the same .....7
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| Re: Say the Word 'Trousers' Without Laughing by Nicholas Jones |
18-Feb-03/11:37 AM |
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oh god what have you done, my secrets out ..shit #7
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| Re: Close by casey |
18-Feb-03/11:38 AM |
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sorry but this is a turd, 3 IS ALL I CAN MUSTER
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| Re: To Laugh Or Cry by casey |
18-Feb-03/11:40 AM |
BETTER THAN THE OTHER ONE, BUT ALAS STILL POO ...4
IMMORTALIZE BEAUTY IN PERSONNIFYING MORE THAN THE OBVIOUS, DESCRIBE HOW YOU FEEL, LOYAL TO YOUR FEELINGS, NOT THE RHYME STRUCTURE.....
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18-Feb-03/11:42 AM |
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| Re: Weekend at the Taj by <~> |
19-Feb-03/3:54 AM |
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travel the world with me Z, with a stopover in the elvis drive through Vegas, I'll pay for the Howard Johnson's and motel6 and you pay for the fuel, I know how to treat rock chix, this is ice ..8
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| Re: Revelation ( 666 ) by Mr Pig |
21-Feb-03/2:37 AM |
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Profound, just out on the counts on some but otherwise thoughtful and very good ...10
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| Re: The Blooding by Mr Pig |
7-Mar-03/3:15 AM |
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Read this again, and it improves every time
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| Re: just as we were by daniella |
7-Mar-03/6:27 AM |
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made me think of happy times and booking a holiday 7
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| Re: Sofia by daniella |
7-Mar-03/6:28 AM |
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| Re: Para Sa Aking Sinta by NewbieMe |
7-Mar-03/6:29 AM |
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| Re: Sofia by daniella |
7-Mar-03/6:36 AM |
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your writing has evolved to high standard, be proud dan
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26-Mar-03/1:48 PM |
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| Re: all in my head by calilegzzz |
2-Apr-03/8:39 AM |
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This is a brown sticky nappy. 3
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2-Apr-03/8:43 AM |
Ahhh your like a Nurse Gods Wife. I have read some shite today on poemranker, so I thought I would cure myself by a gander and a wander at your pie of tasty words. These pre pubescent bastards who fill this site with poo tire me.
Nurse me sister, nurse me I'm so weary of the zero button.
heres my love in the shape of a 9.
May the lord with his tone deaf choir keep you from them.
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2-Apr-03/8:45 AM |
======BY THE WAY TO TRANSLATE THIS GOTO ...SYSTRANSOFT.COM YOU CAN TRANSLATE ANYTHING FROM FRENCH TO JAPANESE, BUT TO ALL THE CRAP POETS (AND I'M THE PIED PIPER) YOU CANNOT TURN A TURD INTO A GEM.)
LONG LIVE FUNK ROCK !
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