| Re: Poemwanker is a bad bitch by Bobjim the II |
18-Jan-03/2:09 AM |
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21-Jan-03/8:41 AM |
Seen from the victims perspective you have written of isolation and image prejudice well, however I wanted the key but only got the keyhole let the reader inside you and roam those ghettos. **7.
Thanks for taking the time for reading my stuff.
Let the wild horses run
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22-Jan-03/7:19 AM |
A mans sole purpose in life is to produce sperm......but we now have sperm banks.
What is our use?
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22-Jan-03/7:27 AM |
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I was going to buy a magazine for the gossip, but fuck it I've saved ?2.50 thanks everyone. I'm constantly in touch with my feminine side since I had the chop, take a chill pill pill daffodils this is poemranker not commentranker, people are getting murdered, married, jiggy while we polish the horns of the devil on out shoulder. I'm shit at poetry but good at being shit.
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22-Jan-03/9:44 AM |
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the only thing that can make women feel lonelier than a vibrator...is a man
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23-Jan-03/5:13 AM |
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I am guessing the title has something or everything to do with the soul doctor, enjoyed the read, some nice images there especially in the concluding stanza. The title though is pissing me off I'm off to find out what it means -8-
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| Re: Jesus rides the comet by Shardik |
23-Jan-03/5:16 AM |
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Cant make total sense of it but you seem to know what your going on about. I love its vibe though, quite humorous was that intentional? -8
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| Re: Jesus was a necromancer by horus8 |
23-Jan-03/5:32 AM |
oH mY gOd !
I thought we were gods toilet he seems to like shitting on us but I do dig this because its so blatantly controversial and your proud of it. The end line could win the war ! 9
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28-Jan-03/6:39 AM |
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this is more like a song without a chorus, add a chorus it needs it -5
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28-Jan-03/6:46 AM |
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the only decent thing on here apart from a couple of others I have read today, keep up the good work -8
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28-Jan-03/9:15 AM |
Caducus (my favourite brother) has just told me to read this and I agree it should be published, I think cads writes nice stuff and he rarely actually RAVES about much so be proud hers a 10, I know your not bothered about the top 15 but like it or not this deserves to be there.
Next time we must be wicked to you, far far too nice things said.
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| Re: It's Over by Jigg |
31-Jan-03/5:51 AM |
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Roadkill relationship liked this 8
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3-Feb-03/6:01 AM |
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When I said that time I want to know what you feel I didnt quite expect this, however you is one foxy chick, thats making me tick, for your so sweet and slick, flesh like treacle, eyes like an eagle, so dont stop searching for the hives of honey, for you is a cat wiv a flat gorgoeous tummy....AYE ! Boyakasha , West Side ! ----10---- horny unicorny.
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| Re: the price of success by brazen |
5-Feb-03/10:10 AM |
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5-Feb-03/10:11 AM |
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| Re: Love Under Will by Tyriana |
6-Feb-03/8:40 AM |
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lots of vivid words in this, its very well written and the 1st yoga reference i've seen in a poem, i'm impressed. -9-
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| Re: Mother Earth by DewDrop |
11-Feb-03/4:44 AM |
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does famring coffee beans for coffee beans make sense though? thats what is bugging me on an otherwise fine piece?
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| Re: Mother Earth by DewDrop |
11-Feb-03/4:44 AM |
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does famring coffee beans for coffee beans make sense though? thats what is bugging me on an otherwise fine piece?
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| Re: The Blooding by Mr Pig |
12-Feb-03/2:32 AM |
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oooooh you foxy fucker, this is 1st class
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12-Feb-03/2:38 AM |
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to see whats in a mans mind shove his cock in your eyeball
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