| Re: ??????? by Emotionz |
9-Jan-03/4:36 AM |
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Quite a good read, honest and an apt ending ..7
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9-Jan-03/4:38 AM |
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LIKED PART 1 AS IT INSPIRED ME, PART 2 BORED ME HAVE AN 8 FOR PART 1 IT WAS WICKED
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| Re: my life by sir_heff |
9-Jan-03/4:40 AM |
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Remorseful, and lamenting but the last 2 lines in my opinion dont work, a stronger metaphor needed for a strong poem ...7
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| Re: lost by sir_heff |
9-Jan-03/4:41 AM |
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Just read your other one which was brilliant this is not it shames your talent (3)
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| Re: genuine by brazen |
9-Jan-03/4:42 AM |
bravo,
yes bravo indeed ..8
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10-Jan-03/2:14 AM |
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Absolutely the most basic form of expression used, unimaginative and lazy, nothing personal but this is trailer park poetry -4-
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| Re: I Celebrate Myself, and sing myself by ChunkyHunkyMonkey |
10-Jan-03/2:16 AM |
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If you find your way out of your own ass heres your vote.......2
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| Re: if she only knew by ChunkyHunkyMonkey |
10-Jan-03/2:17 AM |
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Quite sweet, a good effort much better than celebrating yourself here is a 7
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| Re: Car Crashes by poemwanker |
10-Jan-03/8:46 AM |
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Dogshit ! but its so bad it has a place here and your user name is very nice so i'm giving you 10 for that and 0 for the poem = 5, may the lordy bless you and bathe you till you choke on poetry, ( maximum respect though dude I dig you man
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10-Jan-03/11:55 AM |
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16-Jan-03/9:08 AM |
An 8.
Then a 2.
Then a 7.
Then a......?
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I have to agree sometimes emotional spontaneous combustion can make good poetry. This site is has some pretty diverse writers mostly unique in there own way. I love everybody because like cheap plonk I am easily accessible and chilled, normally spat out instead of being consumed, but then again I'm from the rough part of town and rough diamonds are precious this may be rough in parts but I think precious. Sweet Dreams commentmeisters ~7~
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16-Jan-03/9:10 AM |
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| Re: Theoretical Islamic Math by Bachus |
16-Jan-03/9:16 AM |
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Nice to see an intelligent american who speaks without apology for his beliefs, Bush thought yugoslavia was a car skoda made, its only one mans opinion, and one mans opinion is what democracy is about. Its always difficult to vote on these pieces but Bachus carry on taking no prisoners theres too much bullshit in this world this is escapism like it or bike it. ###8
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| Re: Tree by jauser |
17-Jan-03/6:46 AM |
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Loved the copyright, nice touch to otherwise a poem that has the IQ of Pamela Anderson 3
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| Re: Sex by MuDvAyNe |
17-Jan-03/7:05 AM |
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Lots of it too, hard to imagine serpents getting their leg over. Their is a point to this tell me what it is because i'm high on anaesthetic?
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| Re: Cyanide Summer by cleverdevice |
17-Jan-03/7:07 AM |
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17-Jan-03/7:48 AM |
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Loved the bit about you watching him eat, and his jaw etc etc. This is a piece about observation and beautifying the little moments we forget about. John Lennon said something about it once Can anyone remember? +10
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17-Jan-03/7:49 AM |
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Loved the bit about you watching him eat, and his jaw etc etc. This is a piece about observation and beautifying the little moments we forget about. John Lennon said something about it once Can anyone remember? +10
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| Re: dark angel is a whore by UAFANTHORPEY |
17-Jan-03/8:43 AM |
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shit for brains, your a disgrace to yourself, your mother and poemranker-0
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| Re: she was a garden of roses by crin |
18-Jan-03/2:08 AM |
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My pre conceptions of this (pre-read) was it would be clice ridden, i was wrong its a wicked piece of poetry, salacious, dramatic and coated verses like candle wax high number? of course =9=
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