regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Jul-03/3:50 PM |
last line hits, going back to the city only strengthens the preceding pagan imges 8
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regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Jul-03/3:51 PM |
One thing : forest / forrest
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Re: HATE by forsaken'sbigbro |
15-Jul-03/3:52 PM |
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Re: Acoustic by zzinnia66 |
15-Jul-03/3:55 PM |
Its like the fabulous baker boys Z style ! pffeifered up to the max.
now light that cute cigar, pull up that pale denier and show some thigh.
Very suave, sultry liked the rasp.9
welcome back -you bang
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Re: Igor's inspiration by zzinnia66 |
15-Jul-03/3:57 PM |
Pure but the title reminds me of Draculas insect eating slave.
How was Afrique?
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Re: walking by Rodavlas |
15-Jul-03/3:59 PM |
Last stanzas good but the rest makes me want to blow bubbilicious and read teen mags. Lick this respectable number
5
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Re: Scarecrow by horus8 |
15-Jul-03/4:07 PM |
This is a waayy cool opening but its title lets itself down only due to our sperm perm sock shoving crotch fake timberlake. But its late here midnight, midweek and my brain juices are flaking but i have to say H8 this is the best I have read of yours, I have no MP3
fuck ! 10
And any cu** blue voting this below 5 i'm about to unbutton my zip so get ready to munch on my blower constrictor.
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Re: Scarecrow by horus8 |
15-Jul-03/4:20 PM |
Lose the title how about:
Killing crows.
also last line possibility:
This rivers gone dirty when you turned it to wine,
At least you cant hurt me, if your no longer mine,#
She cried me a river of crocodile tears,
And I drown in the torrent of yesteryears.
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Re: #1 entry from Chico, the star stalker on Pico by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
25-Jul-03/12:27 PM |
Hilarious, just the thought of you in spandex with a mullett, Gof I miss Paul Michael Glasier and Huggie.
Tell me do you live near these dudes ?
You crease me up
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Re: The Bearded Men by walrus8 |
25-Jul-03/12:30 PM |
Dark Dude its only hair ! do not despair
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Re: Middleman by INTRANSIT |
28-Jul-03/9:08 AM |
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regarding some deleted poem... |
31-Jul-03/8:33 AM |
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Re: The Neckbrace of Evil by Bachus |
5-Aug-03/7:01 AM |
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Re: He's Dead You Bastards (for zzinia) by scitz |
5-Aug-03/8:29 AM |
God I must be slipping that took 5 mins to do and I'm welling up.
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Re: The Final Say by Nightmare-Poet |
8-Aug-03/6:26 AM |
This would make a great pimple thats why your not bagging the 10s. An impudent entree in to that category would be advised .
Heres a 5 and i'll 10 it if its a pimple.
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Re: A Poem For World Peace. by GAY AS FU*K |
8-Aug-03/6:52 AM |
Let me tell you bro that I welled up when I read this. I think your a natural leader and your voice needs to be heard so send this to 10 Downing Street and Washington, Brussels - FUCK IT ! ! ! go to the Moslem communties, their Mosques and read this.
I think the Whitney Houston finale really enhances your moral viewpoint on the really nasty and horridable world we live in today.
Finally heres a 10 and your right it should not matter if we're Black, White, Gay (or in your case just camp) Jewish, or 'Dirty British' JUDGEMENT DAY IS HERE AND GAY AS FUCK HAS DECLARED IT.
NOW LETS ALL TRY AND CHANGE.
******I JUST WANT TO SAY I LOVE YOU ALL ON POEM(E)RANKER******
Lets change the way we live I have started by throwing my C.F.C. aerosol under arm deodorant out in to the river.
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Re: WHY IS THE MEDIA SO LONDON-CENTRIC? Written last Tuesday by Nicholas Jones |
11-Aug-03/4:13 AM |
It amazes me that whenever I see a Sci fi movie all the aliens choose to land in London, New York, Los Angeles. I mean what the fucks wrong with Mid Glamorgan? they could hide in the valleys undetected and then launch a surprise attack. As for that Ken Livingstone Mayor of London I have never seen a man fall so badly from the ugly tree and hit every branch on the way down.
Fuck London and its shit food, posh talking scabs from Peckham, and its drivers ahhh man those drivers.
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Re: museheart is internationally published by scitz |
9-Sep-03/9:25 AM |
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Re: museheart is internationally published by scitz |
9-Sep-03/9:26 AM |
I herebty promise not to defile you.
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Re: museheart is internationally published by scitz |
9-Sep-03/9:27 AM |
(speliing mistake intentional to go wiv me bad powertry)
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