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walking (Free verse) by Rodavlas
One day she walked close to me.
she didn't say a word,
but as I rubbed my eye
I heard her sigh.
She walked close to me.
so close my hand would
skim by her thigh.
She flipped her hair over her shoulder,
I heard ever strand pass by.
She walked close to me.
So close our hands would glide.
so close her perfume would shine,
the sweet scent was just so fine.
I walked a little faster this time,
as did she.
I slowed down,
we stopped,
we smiled & snickered and leaned in for a kiss to remember.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 6.0
Overall Rank: 1263
Posted: July 14, 2003 2:33 PM PDT; Last modified: July 14, 2003 2:33 PM PDT
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