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walking (Free verse) by Rodavlas

One day she walked close to me. she didn't say a word, but as I rubbed my eye I heard her sigh. She walked close to me. so close my hand would skim by her thigh. She flipped her hair over her shoulder, I heard ever strand pass by. She walked close to me. So close our hands would glide. so close her perfume would shine, the sweet scent was just so fine. I walked a little faster this time, as did she. I slowed down, we stopped, we smiled & snickered and leaned in for a kiss to remember.

Rodavlas 14-Jul-03/4:24 PM
second stanza... speliing error...."i heard every strand pass by"




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