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A Brand New Eye (Free verse) by EAger to Offend The pursuit of virtue is a dance
wherein one must be clear and
vague at once.
A well-determined abstract gives
rise to emotion by reflecting
the real with A BRAND NEW EYE.
I suffer my mundane hours
by the bushel, by the cord
for an instant of ecstasy
that is the virtue of art.
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Posted: July 12, 2003 1:06 PM PDT; Last modified: July 12, 2003 1:06 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.0 Overall Rank: 1262 Comments:
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Blue Magpie @ 212.205.251.24
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13-Jul-03/12:29 AM
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Interesting.
slightly abstract, but the poets will get it
third verse is the best, a pleasant read
I like the last stanza -'mundane hours by the bushel' is great - this is unusually abstract and philosophical (but given stanza 2 maybe that's the point) - very interesting
Thank you for your comments on my poems. You're very kind and I'm glad you liked them 'cos they were the last flwoering of a creative spurt that's dried up a bit - I'm hoping more will come. If some damn fool publisher ever decides to make a book of mine, I'll send you a copy. Don't hold your breath though...
Blessed with 9.
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