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2838 Denise Dr. Troy, Mi. (Free verse) by Bachus Goulash & knitted blankets
A basement that went on forever
Lilac bush big as a shed & in full bloom
God, the smells.
My Uncle Bruce's Siberian Husky 'Jenna'
lived all year out back.
The most beautiful dog ever.
Loneliest chrystal blue eyes I've ever seen.
The squirrels would piss her off
staying just out of reach,
but then, with no warning,
my uncle would go out there
with a 22 rifle and a hot dog
still hangin out of his mouth and,
CRACK! CRACK!
Silence
smoke
wisp
...
thud
slight bounce & twitch
Then the dog would be on it
As he slid shut the screen door.
Up the ladder:
Killbirds
Down the ladder:
A Brand New Eye
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Posted: July 6, 2003 2:37 PM PDT; Last modified: July 6, 2003 2:37 PM PDTWeighted score: 6.0 Overall Rank: 1261 Comments:
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DreamerSupreme @ 66.81.153.230
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6-Jul-03/2:41 PM
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Well, things were great untill the dogs death lol.. 7.
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OneFingerAnswer @ 216.138.10.3
> DreamerSupreme
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6-Jul-03/2:44 PM
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He shot the squirrel not the dog.
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Bachus @ 24.126.113.154
> OneFingerAnswer
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6-Jul-03/2:47 PM
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Ah, yo're quick today.
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OneFingerAnswer @ 216.138.10.3
> Bachus
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6-Jul-03/2:48 PM
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No. Just timely. :)
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Bachus @ 24.126.113.154
> DreamerSupreme
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6-Jul-03/2:46 PM
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The squirrel died my friend, the dog was on it's carcass chewing. Revenge for hours of torment. Read between the lines. The dog can't be on something if it's dead, now can it?
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DreamerSupreme @ 66.81.153.230
> Bachus
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6-Jul-03/2:56 PM
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ah.. damn me eyes to hell.. i need better glasses.. this sucks, im 17 and i got the eyesight of a 70 year old. yeah, i notice that specific line of details. ok, well dead squirrells.. cmon man they are cute lil mammals.. ah well. i feel stupid ;/
I love making myself laugh.
yeah, me too.. like how my confusion makes me laugh at myself. heh.
You know I use to have a cat and she was very cute, but two days later, after she scratched me, I gave her to the animal shelter. Also I had a pretzel and I didn't care for it much. Oh yeah, I almost forgot, I live in America and also work in America. I would be happy to have a cow ass your mother.
Fairwell
It's supposed to be "AS" your mother, but now that I think about it, It would be funny to see something like that. I hope your mother is Ok.
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