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2838 Denise Dr. Troy, Mi. (Free verse) by Bachus

Goulash & knitted blankets A basement that went on forever Lilac bush big as a shed & in full bloom God, the smells. My Uncle Bruce's Siberian Husky 'Jenna' lived all year out back. The most beautiful dog ever. Loneliest chrystal blue eyes I've ever seen. The squirrels would piss her off staying just out of reach, but then, with no warning, my uncle would go out there with a 22 rifle and a hot dog still hangin out of his mouth and, CRACK! CRACK! Silence smoke wisp ... thud slight bounce & twitch Then the dog would be on it As he slid shut the screen door.

DreamerSupreme 6-Jul-03/2:56 PM
ah.. damn me eyes to hell.. i need better glasses.. this sucks, im 17 and i got the eyesight of a 70 year old. yeah, i notice that specific line of details. ok, well dead squirrells.. cmon man they are cute lil mammals.. ah well. i feel stupid ;/




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